Rising Dragon
Sneak
91 Posts
    
 | | 01/06/2006 6:18 PM |
| I’ve notice that there’s a few fan webcomics here on these forums. It’s cause of maxminis that I’ve discovered the awesome Order of the Stick.
I wanted to chance to share my comic http://sentimentalhorde.com to fantasy gamers, which was the audience that I was aiming for my comic and possible get some feedback. One my goal was create a series that focus around monster characters of the D&D world with the occasional joke geared towards online games like world of warcraft. Of course this comic mostly just an excuse for me draw dragons, lizard, and what ever cool looking monster I feel like drawing :)
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My webcomic: http://www.sentimentalhorde.com Bringing world peace by conquering on nation at time! | |
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The Defenestrator
AesophDarkfable
Warlord
5628 Posts
| | 01/06/2006 7:25 PM |
| | This is pretty decent. Well drawn and I think as you go on the jokes get better. | |
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glumag
Warlord
5968 Posts
| | 01/06/2006 7:31 PM |
| great art! [:D]
I do agree that the humor gets a bit better witht he later panels but, at least for me, they are a bit too clean and rated G [)], a bit more spice would be great! Sarcasm has always been a best friend to me [:D]
Excellent work tho, thank you for sharing the link with us, I'll be sure to bookmark you and read as it progresses. | |
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yack
Commander
3320 Posts
Gatineau Canada
| | 01/07/2006 1:51 PM |
| | These are really good!!! I love the art, some good one liners. A little clean but the art is awesome. | |
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Rising Dragon
Sneak
91 Posts
| | 01/08/2006 9:14 AM |
| | Thanks for the comments. So I need a little more edge in my humor? Personally I don’t care for excessive violence and swearing, but I can see that I might be little too tame. So the trick is will be find what type edge works with my humor. | |
My webcomic: http://www.sentimentalhorde.com Bringing world peace by conquering on nation at time! | |
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The Defenestrator
AesophDarkfable
Warlord
5628 Posts
| | 01/08/2006 3:02 PM |
| quote:
Originally posted by Rising Dragon
Thanks for the comments. So I need a little more edge in my humor? Personally I don’t care for excessive violence and swearing, but I can see that I might be little too tame. So the trick is will be find what type edge works with my humor.
yeah you dont necessarily need violence and swearing, but it doesnt have to be an ah shucks G-type rating. Yeah the trick is find something that your comfortable with. | |
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scruffydude7
Underboss
1196 Posts
Rock Hill, SC
| | 01/09/2006 12:35 AM |
| Good stuff! I like your style of art. I think you are on to something!
Also, I'd like to add that I perfer clever, clean humor in most circumstances, although there is a place for violence and swearing in a webcomic as long as it is not excessive.
If there's no real justification for swearing, though, it's usually just annoying. | |
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Rising Dragon
Sneak
91 Posts
| | 01/14/2006 11:17 AM |
| | Thanks for the advice! Hopefully my new strips will less tame. I'm currently got over two weeks of comics already made, so I've been debating wether I should start posting three times a week instead of two, or coloring all my strips. | |
My webcomic: http://www.sentimentalhorde.com Bringing world peace by conquering on nation at time! | |
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Fun Guy from Yuggoth
Cthulhufnord
Warlord
11113 Posts
Umass Amherst Baby!
| | 03/30/2008 12:11 PM |
| Hmm... can't find this webcomic any more. Pity.
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Duke of Spoils
greyhaze
Warlord
7715 Posts
| | 03/30/2008 12:23 PM |
| | Died off quite a while ago. So did Zogonia online... which I find really really odd. | |
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Fun Guy from Yuggoth
Cthulhufnord
Warlord
11113 Posts
Umass Amherst Baby!
| | 03/30/2008 12:26 PM |
| Wasn't Zogonia published recently? My friend had a copy, it included comics not included on the site.
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Knight of the
Round Table
Thenameless
Warlord
12483 Posts
The Fortress of Solitude
| | 03/30/2008 2:43 PM |
| | Some pretty good stuff. | |
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Duke of Spoils
greyhaze
Warlord
7715 Posts
| | 03/30/2008 5:45 PM |
| Posted By Cthulhufnord on 03/30/2008 12:26 PM
Wasn't Zogonia published recently? My friend had a copy, it included comics not included on the site.
Not really sure. I kept going back to check it out as it was supposed to be haitus for a while, but when time came for it to start up again the site 404'd. Maybe it has a new address now? Just checked it and although there's no 404, it just has a background tile... | |
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Master of the
Awesome Sauce
Teflon Jeff
Warlord
7908 Posts
Sector 2814
| | 03/31/2008 10:36 AM |
| Man, Zogonia was hilarious. I'm gonna go look for it now on Google.
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Master of the
Awesome Sauce
Teflon Jeff
Warlord
7908 Posts
Sector 2814
| | 03/31/2008 10:46 AM |
| zogonia.com is pulling up just he background.
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