here it is.......

lunar handmaiden x2

the dragon castle thing

steelborn griffon

loyal sgragglemaw x3

knight of tommorow x3

runetagged brawler x3

inspired samurai x3

well? what do you think?

A lot of  the valor figs  trade a bit of their offense for more sturdiness or more special abilities.    That's certainly true for the  scragglemaw, samurai, knight of tommorow and  griffon.   Add in the castle, and your band  is somewhat light on  hitting power for their costs.     This can hurt you against an aggressive band that spends points on  offense rather than defense.     I would try to find a balance between good fighters for their cost,  good support figs, and sturdy figs.     having guys that are tougher, but have lower offense lets your opponents gang up on them and take them down one at a time, while your struggling to kill off their smaller guys.

for individual figure choices, I would start by cutting back the scragglemaws and samurai  and go from there.

I'd certainly reduce the number of Samurais. "Bodyguard" is very usefull to protect Passion creatures or Warpstrikers (with low-defense.) But in a pure Valour warband you don't have anything that needs guarding, so you'd be better off spawning another offensive creature instead of the Samurai.

Personally I'd keep the Scragglemaws. Defense 11 is the highest in the game (as good as the noble dragon) and they are a lot easier to spawn. Noble Dragons can be killed by luck or massing a lot of fire-power (usually warpstrikes or expel). Killing 3 units that tough would require a lot of  luck, and it's easier to roll 3x9's than 1x12